About My Crappy First Draft

Something that i'll say about my paper is that I typed just as I was thinking about it. I went straight through and just typed. I know that somethings might not make sense because I probably left out a few details. I don't give specific dates either, but i'll try to figure that out. I'm also not sure if the first 2 paragraphs make sense with what i'm going to eventually discuss. I kind of feel unsure about this idea overrall.