Thursday, September 13, 2007
I haven't stopped thinking about this first draft. I keep trying to figure out a way to actually start writing the essay. So, as I was having my brunch just earlier, I thought of beginning my essay with the very last scene. I think it would be a good idea to start it with the very last incident and describe it as the last drop to finally spill the glass. Then after that write about the incidents and how they led up to that last scene. I think this could be an interesting way to continue the essay.